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ICU Global Youth Essay Competition 2021 Results
Update: March 15, 2022

International Christian University (ICU) and Japan ICU Foundation are pleased to announce the winners of the ICU Global Youth Essay Competition 2021.
This competition was held for the first year in 2021 and invited youths from around the world to share their views on how to make society better.
We would like to extend our gratitude for all of those who applied. In total, we had 343 eligible applications from 36 countries.
Top Prize
Jea Campos, Davao Christian High School, C.P. Garcia, Philippines
Chosen topic: Education
Essay title: "A Book for Every Child"
The writer presented a personal experience and tied it to the topic to further develop ideas for a change. The writer will receive two round-trip airline tickets to Tokyo in summer 2022, or ¥100,000 if they are unable to travel.
Essay title: "A Book for Every Child"
I found myself wandering the streets one night after a failed project. The task I had procrastinated was stressful enough to prompt me to go on a walk. During my stroll, I stumbled upon two kids crouching underneath a lamp post. Upon further inspection, I noticed with them newspapers that were crumpled and ripped of a few sheets. They were attempting to dictate the complicated words found underneath the feature section, squinting as they struggled to read underneath the flickering light. It occurred to me then that while I was busy grumbling about an assignment I could have done days before, to this day, too many children like the two have yet to find access to the same quality education I take for granted here in my country.
The Philippines is a nation that boasts fine beaches and colorful lands. While it is a great place for tourism and laughter, one thing it lacks, however, is the provision of opportunities to learn. According to UNICEF (n.d.), despite being a middle-income country, around 2.8 million children do not go to school; and from the halved population of 3 to 4 year old's that are enrolled, only around 78% complete basic education. In the present, more than 3 million people remain unenrolled since the shutdown ("The Current Education Issues in the Philippines...," 2021). This mostly affects children and youth in the poverty section who continue to work hard to earn and oftentimes choose to work jobs instead of go to school. Moreover, a survey from 2018 found students from the Philippines ranked 78th in math and science, and ranked last out of 79 countries in reading comprehension ("The Current Education Issues in the Philippines...," 2021). Aside from provision, the actual quality of the campuses as well as the materials being taught are not of high standard. From inadequate books and equipment, broken chairs beside cracked windows, insufficient numbers of classrooms, to dirty restrooms; it is a surprise that despite poor learning conditions, students are still able to smile outside.
This can be blamed on the low budget placed on education. Teachers are not paid sufficient wages despite being overworked too, and planned extensions for buildings are often stopped mid-way due to lack of budget. Who will lead the country's future if not the children? How will this land, full of different cultures and people, continue to shine underneath the sun if the citizens and the children have no access to good quality education? Greater investment must be allotted towards education and the likes in order to both provide learning opportunities to every child there is, and improve the resources for learning.
That is not say that there is no hope, however. Being a student lucky enough to have access to even write this, I can speak out about the inequality and poor quality of education here in the Philippines. I can donate, once circumstances allow so, books that are both new and old to places in dire need of them, volunteer to help teach at institutions lacking staff, and urge others to do the same. While individually, I cannot fix the system, if more and more people are encouraged to aim for better learning in the country, education can be provided to every citizen there is.
It will be a slow process, one that will be in need of many people and resources, but one that will inevitably be worth it. In order to allow the same kids I saw reading under a street light, and the many others in similar situations, to properly learn in an actual learning site, the education system in the country must be reconstructed and improved into a stronger and more efficient version for the future of the country. For even the national hero, Jose Rizal, spoke for improvement in schools; as to him, education elevates the country to the highest seat of glory.
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Second Prize
Jesslyne Yau, ACS International, Singapore (originally from Indonesia)
Chosen topic: Education
Essay title: "Diamonds in the Sky"
The writer presented thoughtful ideas regarding educational issues in Indonesia. The writer will receive a 50,000 yen gift card.
Essay title: "Diamonds in the Sky"
Education, accessible to all but claimed by few, such is the irony that sums up my view. I come from a modest yet beautiful country, Indonesia, where there are warm, kind-hearted people to begin with. Unfortunately, the lack of access to education has hindered them from discovering their full potential which leaves my country with numerous diamonds in the rough. People coming from rural areas are those who are mostly left out in accessing education.
One way to make sure that everyone receives quality education is through building schools in all areas, providing teachers with quality training, as well as ensuring teachers' welfare. In Indonesia, schools are prominent in urban areas but scarce in rural areas, which reminds me of the Indonesian novel based on a true story, entitled: "Laskar Pelangi". The author encapsulates the life of ten students who came from villages and the struggles they faced to pursue education. When reading this novel, I believe that the government should allocate resources into building at least one subsidised school in every village and constant maintenance is needed. This makes education more accessible to people in rural areas as they do not have to travel far and pay for education. It is important that education should be free as people from rural areas believe that their children should work with their parents rather than to spend their money on education; when in reality, we know that education is an important investment for their children's future. The school's maintenance is also important as buildings can erode or collapse if it is not well taken care of.
Quality education is another issue to be tackled in Indonesia. There is a difference between a person who is able to teach and those who are smart. A smart person does not necessarily have the skills to educate others. This seems like an obvious fact; nonetheless, it is a neglected one in my country. I believe that it is best for the government to provide a training program for those who want to become a teacher. They should be taught how to best educate students in the student's most preferred way, whether they are visual, auditory, or kinaesthetic learners. This would help students better retain information and skills that they learn in school. Upon completion of this program, the teachers can be given a trial run on teaching students. The students can then evaluate the teacher's style of teaching to assess their readiness to become a teacher.
In addition to this, a teacher's well-being is essential to be looked after as it influences the quality of teaching. In Indonesia, not many people are keen on becoming a teacher. This is because a teacher's profession is being looked down upon and teachers' salaries are unequal in differing schools. A teacher may earn a very high salary in international schools; however, teachers in local schools earn a low salary, which may be inadequate to cover their living expenses. Because of this, the government should set a minimum wage for teachers which ensures their quality of life to attract more people to this occupation. Moreover, teachers should also be appreciated by society for their contributions. This is where we, the citizens, play a role. Teachers should be well-looked upon by society as they are the guiding figures of students who help them build a better tomorrow.
In conclusion, these actions such as building subsidised schools in rural areas, providing training programs for teachers, and ensuring teachers' welfare are a few ways to improve the quality of education in Indonesia alongside making it more accessible to the community. Education should be indeed claimed by all. It is an essential element of human capital and is the most valuable asset of a country. It is the key to turning diamonds in the rough to diamonds in the sky, where one's potential would be a beacon of light to the country.
Bibliography: Hirata, Andrea. Laskar Pelangi. Belang, 2005.
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Third Prize
Increasing from the initial 10 winners, 12 were named for the Third Prize given the diverse and creative list of essays. Each will receive a 5,000 yen gift card.
Chloe Wrzesinski, Castlemaine Secondary College, Australia
(Gender Equality "Addressing Gender Inequality in Australia")
Keiko Ito, Decatur High School, U.S.A.
(Education "Left Out: Racial Inequality and Education in the United States")
Imran Aly Rassiwalla, Maggie L. Walker Governor's School for Government and International Studies, U.S.A.
(Education "An Essay of Hope: The unequal scars in the United States education system and how they can fade")
Prisha Agrawal, Woodstock School, India
(Gender Equality "Gender [In]Equality")
Sena Gesteland, Metuchen High School, U.S.A.
(COVID-19 "COVID-19 and How to Solve Global Inequality between Rich and Poor Nations")
Kotomi Hasegawa, YMCA of Hong Kong Christian College, Hong Kong
(COVID-19 "Respect Your Team")
Grace Lee, Seoul International School, South Korea (originally from U.S.A.)
(COVID-19 "Not So Temporary Measures")
Angela Patrice Navarrete, Faith Christian School, Philippines
(Education "Quality Education in The Philippines - Right or Privilege?"
Caden Coleman, DC International school, U.S.A.
(Education "The Human Right of Quality Education")
Elisabeth Eckstein, Maggie L. Walker Governor's School for Government and International Studies
(Education "Solutions for Education Inequality in the United States")
Mija Pranckutė, Karalienės Mortos Mokykla, Lithuania
(Gender Equality "Gender norms should not exist")
Karen Tun, Rock Ridge High School, U.S.A.
(Education "Education Deserts Across the Nation")
We are going to hold 2nd essay competition, starting from around April/May. We are looking forward to your application!
International Christian University (ICU) and Japan ICU Foundation invite youth from around the world to share their views on how to make society better. Each year, essay topics are selected in the areas of human rights and current events. For 2021, the application will be open from August 15 to November 30. Apply now to win great prizes, including the top prize of two round-trip tickets to Japan!

Prizes
Top Prize ( 1 winner ): Two round-trip airline tickets to Tokyo in the summer of 2022 for the winner and a guarantor. A visit to ICU will be incorporated into the trip. In lieu of the airline tickets, the top prize winner has the option of receiving 100,000 yen.
Second Prize ( 1 winner ): 50,000 yen gift card.
Third Prize ( 10 winner ): 5,000 yen gift card.
Application Open Date: | Sunday, August 15, 2021, 0:00 JST |
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Application Close Date: | Tuesday, November 30, 2021, 23:59 JST |
Announcement of Winners: | March 14, 2022. Results will be announced on the ICU website and by email. |
Participation fee: | Free |
In what language should I write?
Essays must be written in English.
What can I write about?
Essays must focus on one of this year's topics. Select one of the following questions from the areas of human rights and current events.
1) From its founding after World War II, ICU has been committed to the Universal Declaration of Human Rights. Every matriculating student signs a pledge to uphold the Declaration. One of the human rights that is emphasized in the Declaration is the right to quality education. Does everyone in your country have equal access to education? If not, who is left out? How can you make sure that everyone receives quality education?
2) ICU is strongly committed to gender equality. Through the Gender and Sexuality Studies Major and the activities of the Center for Gender Studies, students have an opportunity to learn about and get involved in promoting gender equality. Why is gender equality important? What can be done to promote gender equality in your country?
3) The COVID-19 pandemic has had devastating consequences for millions of people. It has also disrupted everyday life in countries across the globe. Based on the experience of COVID-19, what changes would you make to create a better society?
Is there a word limit?
Essays must be no more than 650 words. Essays must have a title. The title does not count towards the word limit.
Who can apply?
Applicants must be aged 14-18 as of November 30, 2021 and must currently reside outside of Japan. Current university/college students are ineligible to apply.
How can I apply?
Click the following link to view the application form and instructions
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All essays must be submitted online.
How are essays evaluated?
A group of judges from ICU and the Japan ICU Foundation will evaluate all essays using the the following factors:
- Thesis
- Supporting arguments
- Creativity/Originality
- Execution of writing (Audience/Coherence/Clarity/Grammar/Style)
All essays will be checked for plagiarism.
An essay will be disqualified if:
- It does not address the topic.
- It does not include a title.
- An applicant covers more than one topic.
- It is not the applicant's original work.
Please Note
The winners' full name, essay, title, and location will be shared on the Global Youth Essay Competition website. Other information may be displayed upon receiving consent from winners and their guarantors.
About the Organizers
International Christian University is a leading private university characterized by its bilingual (Japanese/English) liberal arts education in Tokyo, Japan. From its establishment in 1953, ICU has aimed to educate students in an international setting to be stewards of a just and peaceful world. Visit Website.
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The Japan ICU Foundation is an independent educational foundation based in New York City. Its mission is to work with International Christian University to nurture global citizens who contribute to the well-being of humanity. Visit Website.
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EMAIL: ICU-Essay@icu.ac.jp
FAQs
How do I submit my essay?
An essay should be submitted online from this link: https://japanicuf.submittable.com/submit/ba59a6f3-7f0c-4de6-9620-c78b7e15ea26/2021-icu-global-youth-essay-competition or from the "Apply Here" button on this website.
After you sign up for Submittable, the application page will appear. In a designated text box, you can type in your essay directly, or write in another document and paste it.
I am 18 years old now. Am I eligible to apply?
If you are 18 years old on November 30, 2021, the deadline of application, you are eligible to apply. Please also note that if you will be attending college/university/higher education by November 30, you are not eligible to apply.
Should I cite my sources?
Although this essay competition is not aimed to look at your research skills, you must cite the source of any quotations, ideas, thoughts, or words in your essay that are not your own. This can be done by including in-text citations (which count toward the 650-word limit). Additionally, you may include full citations (which DO NOT count toward the word limit) in the Bibliography text box. MLA and APA styles are recommended. Failure to identify non-original material will result in disqualification.
If you submitted an essay without a bibliography option, please contact us. We will allow you edit and resubmit their essay.