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ICU Global Youth Essay Competition 2022 Results

Update: December 13, 2022

International Christian University (ICU) and Japan ICU Foundation are pleased to announce the winners of the ICU Global Youth Essay Competition 2022.

This competition invited youths from around the world to share their views on how to make society better.

We would like to extend our gratitude for all of those who applied. In total, we had 388 eligible applications from 69 countries and regions.

Top Prize: Laura Zawora Mirella (from Mikołaj Kopernik Secondary School No. I in Katowice in Poland)

foto_Laura.jpgEssay Topic: Peacebuilding
Essay Title: "What About Us"
The writer will receive two round-trip airline tickets to Tokyo in summer 2023, or 100,000JPY if one is unable to travel, and a book related to the World Declaration of Human Rights translated by ICU students.

Essay title: "What About Us"

"Man is inherently good, while evil comes from ignorance". Erasmus's words perfectly illustrate the sources of many conflicts or misconceptions about them existing in the world through the abovementioned ignorance. Only by learning the true history of the world, constantly updating it so that we know the genesis of conflicts and their prevention, can we build peace consciously.

Peacebuilding to me means learning the truth about the other person. We won't get to the root of a problem by hearing about it third-hand, after correction, or by only hearing the positives or the negatives.

It requires lots of patience and willingness to listen to each other, but the result will carry benefits, not only for ourselves but also for future generations. I believe that the ideal solution would be to create a 'Peace History Museum'. It would offer the possibility of creating a room for any willing country to present the stories of the conflicts concerned, their effects on that country, what lessons can be learnt from them and how, on that occasion, the country has contributed to peacebuilding - repairing damage and helping others. Such information would come from a designated group of representatives, including participants of the event in question, regardless of age, (if the event took place a long time ago - the participants are dead, the information would be compiled from relatives and personal documents - e.g. diaries) from the country in question under the supervision of a specialist to prevent the falsification of history.

The museum would host meetings between young people and representatives of organisations whose idea is to "save from oblivion". The museum itself would also organise a competition every year, which would consist of one text being chosen from each country about that year's problem in the country and how it was dealt with - how it led to peacebuilding. For this, young people would have to research the causes of that situation - broadening their awareness of it. Let us focus on the future, not forgetting the past, but learning from it.

Turning to my own experience of spreading peace. I have certainly been influenced by the current situation in Ukraine and the reception of refugees in Poland. In my high school, there were also Ukrainian youth, whom if we wanted to help, we first had to understand (figuratively and literally). We organised Ukrainian-Polish glossaries, collections of clothes, food, and medicines. Next are the visits to the memorials. No book or film compares to physically being at the scene of a crime and hearing about it from its victims. A visit to Auschwitz is a clear example. As long as one does not see with one's own eyes the piles of clothes, shoes, hair, or the conditions in which the prisoners lived there, one cannot grasp the importance of peacebuilding - to ensure that people will never again suffer such a fate.

Another example - visiting Taizé, an ecumenical village where different faiths come together for the proverbial conversation. This place shows how faith and the human desire to act can be a common bond. The activities on site are designed to facilitate this. To quote Brother Roger: "If some are gripped by worry about the future and find themselves at a standstill, there are also young people all over the world who are inventive and creative. They know God did not create us to be passive. For them, life is not subject to a blind destiny. They are aware that scepticism and discouragement have the power to paralyse human beings".

To conclude my speech, I will once again quote Brother Roger, who explicitly says to strive to build a better future, despite the hardships: "Gather everything that happens, trivialities included, without reservation, regret or nostalgia, in inexhaustible wonder. Set out, going forward one step at a time, from doubt towards faith, not worrying about the impossible ahead. Light fire, even with the thorns that tear you".


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Second Prize: Tanisha Thaosen (from Beacon Academy Jakarta in Indonesia)

2022essay2ndwinner.jpgEssay Topic: 1. Environmental Studies
Essay Title: "How Climate Changed Me"
The writer will receive 50,000JPY gift card and a book related to the World Declaration of Human Rights translated by ICU students.

Essay title: "How Climate Changed Me"

"We are living on this planet as if we had another one to go to" ~ Terri Swearingen It was just another day of being a fourth grader on February 25th, 2017. There had been a heavy downpour since early morning but I didn't think much of it sitting in my cozy classroom until it was time to go home. At that point, I didn't know the journey of a mere 3 km would be the turning point of my life.

The entire area was submerged and it looked like a scene straight out of the movie "Water world". I felt over-awed by the power of the water that made us trapped in our car for close to 6 hours. We had no choice but to ditch the car. Initially, it seemed fun to wade through knee-deep water but soon the water level rose swiftly to my chest. I looked around at poles, pillars, and trees inundated with water, vehicles half-submerged, and rescue boats evacuating stranded citizens on what was once a road. It seemed like an eternity before I reached home cold, tired, and reeling in shock. That fateful day made me realize that climate change is real and happening.

Residing on the beautiful Java island in Indonesia surrounded by natural wonders and rich culture, one cannot ignore the fact that Jakarta is rapidly developing as the fastest-sinking city in the world. One of the primary causes for this is uncontrolled groundwater extraction and rapid urbanization. The Government should move the focus from urban development projects to allocating more funds towards expanding the development of coastal sea walls and upgrading drainage systems. Sustainable water management should be followed by communities by harvesting rainwater to supply sanitary requirements as well as drinking water. A tunnel system should be created to capture floodwaters and transport them into a water tank that can be used to recharge groundwater and used for agricultural purposes. Floating cities can be a long-term solution for changing water levels.

A solution I think is most integral is by promoting awareness, starting at the elementary level. I believe that it is absolutely essential for schools to implement environmental education as a mandatory subject in their curriculum with an emphasis on the UN SDG's. The earlier children are educated on the potential threats to the environment, the faster they develop their attitude and skills to care for the environment. This will engage children in their surroundings and understand how their actions impact the environment. Furthermore, there can be challenges where students 'explore the extreme' to come up with innovative and creative solutions to environmental issues applicable in real life. Students can conduct a year-long research project called the 'Community Action Service' where they can work in teams to serve the community in an environmental aspect.

Being a Gen Z kid, I am very much concerned about Planet Earth and its well-being. In elementary school, I designed an eco-friendly air cooler made of plastic bottles that were aimed to assist the rural population that did not have access to electricity. Furthermore, as part of my individual research project in middle school, I created a hydroponics system at home by growing vegetables sustainably. I also developed 3 prize-winning apps on climate change that addressed SDG Goals 11, 13, and 14. Currently, I am a participant in the New York Academy of Sciences STEM challenge where I and my team are creating a prototype vessel that mitigates and tracks oil spills.

In these small but significant ways, I am doing my part to combat climate change and so can you! There are countless ways to mitigate climate change but the first is to alter our mindset that climate change is happening. Every action, no matter how small, makes a difference. Don't wait for change, Be the change.


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Third Prizes:

Increasing from the initial 10 winners, 11 were named for the Third Prize given the creative list of essays. The writers below will receive 5,000JPY gift card and a book related to the World Declaration of Human Rights translated by ICU students.
Sherin Chong (from Bandung Alliance Intercultural School in Indonesia) Peacebuilding "Slowing Down"
Phonprajan Thompson Valerie (from Burirampittayakhom School in Thailand) Environmental Studies "A Story for a Rainy Day"
Muhammad Danial (from Sekolah Menengah Kebagsaan Jeram in Malaysia) Environmental Studies "The Unsolved Dilemma"
Wai Chin Annika Suen (from St. Paul's Convent School in Hong Kong) Environmental Studies "Start Minimising Packaging Waste Today!"
Chae Won Lee (from Raffles Christian School Pondok Indah in Indonesia) Peacebuilding "Breaking Out of Our Shells"
Mei Kambara Leilani (from Kalani High School in the U.S.) Environmental Studies "My Duty To Protect My Hometown"
Saya Lindholm (from Woodinville High School in the U.S.) Peacebuilding "An Anchor of Peace: How Local Efforts Create Community"
Tahsin Hossain (from BISESJ: Bangladesh International School, (English Section), Jeddah in Saudi Arabia) Environmental Studies "Empty Plates."
Carlos Manuel Eusoya Caoyonan (from Philippine Science High School - Western Visayas Campus in the Philippines) Peacebuilding "A Drop of Water"
Yoyo Ngai (from St Paul's Convent School in Hong Kong) Environmental Studies "City of Lights"
Salsa Suherdi Nur Safina Annajah (from SMK Negeri 2 Sukabumi in Indonesia) Environmental Studies "Grey to Blue"

 

Special Prize for non-native English writer:

Catarina Carrareto de Oliveira (from Santa Maria Minas Unidade Pampulha in Brazil) Environmental Studies "The word that turns into action"
The writer will receive 5,000JPY and a book related to the World Declaration of Human Rights translated by ICU students

International Christian University (ICU) and Japan ICU Foundation invite youths from around the world to share their views on how to make society better. Each year, essay topics are selected in the areas of human rights and current events. For 2022, the application is open from August 16 to October 11. Apply to win great prizes, including the top prize of two round-trip tickets to Japan!

 

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Competition flyer (for printing)

Prizes
Top Prize ( 1 winner ): Two round-trip airline tickets to Tokyo in the summer of 2023 for the winner and a guarantor. A visit to ICU will be incorporated into the trip. In lieu of the airline tickets, the top prize winner has the option of receiving 100,000 yen.

Second Prize ( 1 winner ): 50,000 yen gift card.

Third Prize ( 10 winners ): 5,000 yen gift card.

Special Prize (1 winner): 5,000 yen gift card for those who have not been educated in English for more than 1 year.

Application Open Date: Tuesday, August 16, 2022, 0:00 JST
Application Close Date: Tuesday, October 11, 2022, 23:59 JST
Announcement of Winners: 11:00 AM, Tuesday, December 13, 2022. Results will be announced on the ICU website at 11:00 AM (JST) and by email.
Participation fee: Free

Way of Application:

All essays must be submitted online through Submittable platform.

Click the following to sign up, read the instructions, and apply!

APPLY HERE

2022 Essay questions

Essays must focus on one of this year's topics. Select one of the following questions from the areas of human rights and current events.

  • Environmental Studies is one of the majors offered at ICU. In this major, students critically think and learn about issues such as food safety and water quality, consumption and development, ethics and education, etc. from a range of perspectives. What environmental issue(s) do you care about? What are unique and creative solutions to address them?
  • Born of deep remorse over World War II, ICU was founded with the aim of nurturing global citizens who serve to create peace in the world. What does peacebuilding mean to you? How can young people work towards peace in our fractured world? What experiences related to peace and peacebuilding have had an impact on you?

There are no right answers to these questions; we are not looking for essays that propose the "correct" solutions that already exist. We want to learn about YOUR original ideas. As you write, start by reflecting on your own experience, think about what the problem is, and then write your own opinion.

Language: Essays must be written in English.

Word Limit: No more than 650 words, excluding essay title and bibliography

Essay Title: Essays must have a title. Please create a title that best describes the essence of your essay. The title does not count towards the word limit.

Eligibility:

Applicants must be aged 14-18 as of October 11, 2022 and must currently reside outside of Japan. University/college students as of October 11, 2022 are ineligible to apply.

How are essays evaluated?

A group of judges from ICU and the Japan ICU Foundation will evaluate all essays using the the following factors:

  • Thesis
  • Supporting arguments
  • Creativity/Originality
  • Execution of writing (Audience/Coherence/Clarity/Grammar/Style)

All essays will be checked for plagiarism.

An essay will be disqualified if:

  • It does not address the topic.
  • It does not include a title.
  • An applicant covers more than one topic.
  • It is not the applicant's original work.

Please Note
The winners' full name, essay, title, and location will be shared on the Global Youth Essay Competition website. Other information may be displayed upon receiving consent from winners and their guarantors.

Past Winners
Visit the website below to read the winners' essays.

Result of 2021

About the Organizers

Mc220331_075.JPGInternational Christian University is a leading private university characterized by its bilingual (Japanese/English) liberal arts education in Tokyo, Japan. From its establishment in 1953, ICU has aimed to educate students in an international setting to be stewards of a just and peaceful world. Visit Website.
ICU Website

The Japan ICU Foundation is an independent educational foundation based in New York City. Its mission is to work with International Christian University to nurture global citizens who contribute to the well-being of humanity. Visit Website.
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About the Sponsor

Lighthouse is a Japanese publishing company located in the United States. Lighthouse also organizes college fairs and operates a website to help students all over the world learn about the benefits of studying in Japan.Visit the website.
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Contact

ICU Public Relations Office
TEL: +81-422-33-3058
EMAIL: ICU-Essay@icu.ac.jp

FAQs

How do I submit my essay?

An essay should be submitted online from this link: https://japanicuf.submittable.com/submit/08968d21-56bf-4740-a859-2bacf93266d9/2022-icu-global-youth-essay-competition or from the "Apply Here" button on this website.
After you sign up for Submittable, the application page will appear. In a designated text box, you can type in your essay directly, or write in another document and paste it.

I am 18 years old now. Am I eligible to apply?

If you are 18 years old on October 11, 2022, the deadline of application, you are eligible to apply. Please also note that if you will be attending college/university/higher education by October 11, you are not eligible to apply.

Should I cite my sources?

Although this essay competition is not aimed to look at your research skills, you must cite the source of any quotations, ideas, thoughts, or words in your essay that are not your own. This can be done by including in-text citations (which count toward the 650-word limit). Additionally, you may include full citations (which DO NOT count toward the word limit) in the Bibliography text box. MLA and APA styles are recommended. Failure to identify non-original material will result in disqualification.
If you submitted an essay without a bibliography option, please contact us. We will allow you edit and resubmit their essay.

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